
yesterday it rained..there was thundering too..ho how much i was excited..to see those raindrop dancing on the floor..they too seemed so excited to touch the earth..ho it such a lovely scene..in this world where rains are rare its really a blessing just to see one.
i was so much overpowered with joy that i was at a loss as to how to enjoy. took a cup of tea and went out just to have that drizzles on my face. it was stormy..it was loud as if they were wild with joy.
as i cant paint , as i cant write i just went out and got myself wet.the breeze has turned wind and it was chilly ..my whole system shivered with the thrill of it. the whole way deserted me and the rain alone..ho..i understood how a common man enjoys .
i put my sandals into muddy water and let those cars splash over me.
i just looked to see why it stopped then i saw the rainbows shine.
hey u frnd u made my day with sreaming along with me..u screams made me sane..and we enjoyed the rainbow..you have brought the youthness back..you make me a youth again.
and u dear poet i really enjoyed ur poem on breeze.its a new of looking at it..ur words are sweet and simple.you make me look twice out to enjoy the simple pleasures of nature. you have that in you it to write..ur words are rhyming.pleasure to read.
u know me yet i remain unknown as u know only part of me.yes i am who u think i am and yet i am bit more than that.i look forward to the poet in u other things just fade away.
6 comments:
this post is truly beautiful in its own way
hmmm i am getting addicted to comments.
yes, it IS a wonderful feeling to have the rain on your face...
what a wonderful feeling.. you put it so well.. the rain on your face... and tea on a rainy day.. perfect!!
@suma.good to know u feel the same my collegues were telling i was mad.
@thanks preethi for the visit. i was in the office . so royally could enjoy rain and tea..otherwise no way!!
wonderful post ....it is an expression of innate thoughts...well wrtten
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